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Taming a Wild Jha'dur
A wild Jha'dur gets tamed...
The Jha'dur watched the prey kneel down and reached out its hand, the animal felt it brush its mind and the ears that were pinned back against its head moved forward as the animal sat down. Its posture was relaxed but the prey still kept acting like it would attack.
A smart move.
Jha'durs were the top predators and not the bipedal creatures that shared this planet.
The prey held out their hand and the Jha'dur stood up, it walked towards the prey and sniffed their hand. It was a female prey.
Its tail curled and waved as it bumped its head against her chest, twrring loudly and its long tongue sliding out to lick her face. It kept licking her jaw and behind her ears, tasting her scent and remembering it.
Imprinting on it.
The Jha'dur had found its life companion.
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Jha'dur

"Jha'durs are fierce Faberian hunting animal and like all creatures living on Faber, it is Force-sensitive."
 – Marrika Nerys 
Jha'durs are canine-like creatures native to Faber, Jha'durs were Force-sensitive and thus capable of being domesticated by the native Faberians. 
Biology and appearance 
Jha'durs’ are canine in appearance with the long narrow muzzle and large erected ears but there are some features that make them different than other canine like creatures. All members of the Jha'durs had orange eyes with vertical pupils that were quite disconcerting to other races. They had extremely sharp teeth that ran along the length of their snout, with four fangs protruding over their lower lip, each ending in a double point. Slightly elastic jaw muscle and cheek increase bite force like a rubber-band snapping back and also allows for a large bite range-like a snake. They extremely long green tongue, which they use to smell their prey when t
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Literature
Chapter 2
Star Wars
The Clone Wars: Everything Burns
The Redemption, Separatist Space

Grand Admiral Qatai Vernius stood in the bridge of the Redemption as the Cruiser reverted to realspace, within sight of the Separatist battle cruisers. Her hands were clasped behind her back as she stared out of the viewport with an unwavering eye, she was standing at attention something that she always did now, given how long she had been in this position.
"Ma'am, we are being hailed." A Private said.
Qatai looked over her shoulder and said, "Ignore it... They will learn soon enough on why we are here."
There was a chime and then a hologram of the Empress Regnant appeared next to her, "Start the boarding, destroy all but the center ship."
"Your will is our own." Qatai said with a fist over her heart and a slight bow before the hologram disappeared. "All ships open fire! Launch the fighters!!" 
From the side view-ports, she could see the fighters zooming by. "Send out the boarding part
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Literature
Questionable Loyalty
Grand Admiral Thrawn has a conversation with Inquisitor Kilara....
"Thank you for coming, Inquisitor Kilara." Thrawn said as he slowly turned to face the woman who was standing silently behind him.
She was tall, not at tall as he was but close enough with her long black hair pulled back into a braided bun and her brown eyes were leveled at him with a blank look.
"You're welcome, sir." Inquisitor Kilara said, her voice was accent-less...just like the rest of her kind.
Thrawn sat down at his seat and said, "You must be wondering why I called you here, Inquisitor Kilara."
A blink and a subtle shift of her shoulders before she said, "I don't question the orders of my superior officers, sir."
"Technically your superior officers are the Grand Inquisitor and Lord Vader." Thrawn said.
"True but I like to humor everyone in our Empire, sir." Kilara said.
Thrawn hummed thoughtfully and said, "Understandable, Inquisitor Kilara." He interlaced his fingers in front of his chin. "Now to
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Inquisitor Thraix
Hera goes up against a new Inquisitor...
Hera was running from a new Inquisitor, this one was a male. He had black hair that is thick and long, his hair is styled in a half-bun that has gold hair ornaments holding it back. He had a tanned complexion and gold eyes. He had black markings on his body including the markings the rest of the new Inquisitors had. His body was muscular in appearance cladded in that black armor that the new Inquisitors were now wearing.
"Where are you, little Twi'lek?" The Inquisitor, Thraix, called.
The female Twi'lek ducked underneath some pipping and ducked behind some crates, breathing heavily.
Inquisitor Thraix ducked under the same pipping and looked around, "I can sense your fear...your concern for your precious Rebellion." He started to walk. "We just want to say hello and introduce ourselves...before we destroy your Rebellion that is."
He stopped walking and looked around then raised his hand and with the movement Hera was lifted in
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Literature
Inquisitor Xirena
Sabine goes up against a new Inquisitor....
Sabine was firing upon the new Inquisitor was walking towards her with an intent of a predator, the woman kept batting away each bolt with a lazy flick of her wrists. She had pure black skin with white hair, white lips and her eyes were a silvery blue color, on her face was the same marks as the first new Inquisitor that they had met and she wore the same armor as well.
"Who are you?!"
"Inquisitor Xirena." The woman said calmly as she kept batting away each bolt.
Sabine narrowed her eyes at her and said, "So you are one of those new Inquisitors? We killed your predecessors already and we can kill you as well." 
Xirena smirked at her and said, "Oh, you poor, poor thing there's so much you don't know about us and yet you think your Rebellion is strong enough to go up against us? Your precious Jedi?"
"What are you saying?"
"What I am saying, little girl, is that we're a lot stronger than our predecessors which means we're not
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Inquisitor Xiamara
Zeb goes up against a deadly new Inquisitor...
"Karabast!" Zeb cursed as he was forced backwards by this new Inquisitor, she wasn't like the woman they had met a few months ago. She wore the same armor but this were obvious differences. This woman was shorter with a mask over her face but he saw that she had long, thick white hair, her hair is styled in a half-bun with four thick braids, hanging to her hip; the braid over her shoulder is held together by a black leather band with gold clasps on the both ends of the band and the three braids that hangs behind her back is held together by a gold, thin, long clasp. She has thin braids on either side of her heads that does into the bun and her bangs fall to her breasts. She wore fingerless gloves so he could see her white skin and her long nails that ended in points, which she was using on him.
He could see two lightsabers on her belt that she had never once drawn during their fight.
Zeb growled and struck her across her mask
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Literature
Prologue
Star Wars Rebels: Inquisitors Rising
Prologue
“How’s the device?”
“It’s good, it has a steady beep, Doctor.” The Nurse said as she looked at a silver, round device that was on the unconscious woman’s neck, just below her ear. She wasn’t the only one that had the device on her, there was three others.
Two women and one man.
“Why is the Emperor having us put this on? I thought they were loyal.” The Nurse said.
The Doctor looked at her and said, “Because they are too dangerous, while they are loyal to him he’s worried about what would they do if they met the missing Princess.”
“So this is to make sure they don’t betray him?”
“Yes, it’ll kill them as soon as they do.”
The woman doesn’t say anything at that, just wiping the blood off the woman’s neck. It was a dark red color, very much like dried blood but it wasn&
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Literature
Grand Inquisitor and New Inquisitors
The Grand Inquisitor meets the new Inquisitors…..
The Grand Inquisitor walked into a room, stopping when he saw four kneeling figures in black in the middle of the room. There was three women and one man. The white haired man walked over to them until he was in front of the first one. He looked down at her but she kept her eyes lowered.
This one is Inquisitor Kilara.
He moved to the next one, she wore a mask over her face but he saw that she had long, thick white hair, her hair is styled in a half-bun with four thick braids, hanging to her hip; the braid over her shoulder is held together by a black leather band with gold clasps on the both ends of the band and the three braids that hangs behind her back is held together by a gold, thin, long clasp. She has thin braids on either side of her heads that does into the bun and her bangs fall to her breasts. She wore fingerless gloves so he could see her white skin.
This one is Inquisitor Xiamara
He moved to the third wo
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Literature
Inquisitor Kilara
The crew of the Ghost meets a new breed of Inquisitor...
"Hurry up!" Kanan said. "It's only a matter of time before they realize that we're here!" The crew of the Ghost stealing weapons and ammunition from the Empire, they had snuck into an Imperial warehouse. They had dealt with the guards that had been posted around it and started to take out the crates.
"This is just too easy!" Sabine said. "It's almost as if they were just wanting us to take it!"
Before Hera or Kanan could say anything to her, a new voice cut it...a woman's voice.
"More like we were wanting you to spring the trap, child."
They spun around and looked up to see a woman standing on am AT AT, looking down at them...and below her was a squadron of Stormtroopers.
Zeb and Ezra looked at Sabine and both said, "Thanks a lot, Sabine."
"Who are you?" Kanan asked as he took a step towards the woman.
The woman smiled and said, "I am Inquisitor Kilara, Master Jedi." She bowed as she smirked at him.
"An
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Literature
Stormtroopers
Kestra was running from a group of Stormtroopers through a bustling town, it was during a mission for the Rebels but it had been botched because Sabine had to prove herself to the teen that had actually been raised by the Mandalorians and knew how to speak their language. Kestra could careless since she wasn't the head of the Verd Clan, her cousin was and she knew that Shae would actually shot Sabine if the girl should ever come around to ask her to join the Rebels.
The Verd Clan were very loyal to Manda'lore and their culture, and refuse to stray from it.
She skidded to a stop when she made a wrong turn and ended up facing a dead end.
"Osik...." Kestra muttered before she turned around to face the Stormtroopers. "Would you believe me if I said that I had just been passing through?"
"Hands in the air!"
"...Alright then." Kestra muttered. "I will gladly accept your surrenders, gentlemen...."
"Hands in the air!"
"Alright, alright...sheesh." She held up her hands and waited
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Literature
Top Predator
Jax was following after his prey, he had his tail slightly above the ground so it wouldn't drag behind him. Alerting the prey that it was being hunted.
Jax was in the trees above and slightly behind his prey, watching as it walked underneath him. The creature looked away before he jumped down behind some tall bushes without causing the tree or bushes to make any sound at his movement. Jax moved along underneath the bushes, his belly almost touching the ground as he moved. His eyes were focused on his prey as he silently moved behind it.
Jax creeped out from out of the bushes and into the bushes across the pathway, the tip of his tail flicking as he moved. When the prey moved to look behind them, they was nothing there not even a shaking bush...
Though when they turned around, all they saw was a large gaping maw with white dagger-like teeth then they saw only darkness.
Jax released the prey's neck and looked behind him when he heard rustling and out walked his master, she kneeled next t
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Stupid Stormtroopers
Kestra and Ezra sneak into an Imperial Base...

Two upside down crates were moving towards an Imperial Base, they would stop whenever a squad of Stormtroopers would turn around the corner and head towards them. Once the recent squad had moved passed them, the crates started to move once more until they were against a wall when they were suddenly moved upwards and two teens poked their heads out and looked around.
"You were right. These things really do work." Ezra whispered.
Kestra looked at him and said, "Told ya." She smirked at him before she looked at the other occupant that shared her crate with her, Jax looked at her and chittered softly. Kestra smiled at him and patted his neck with her free hand before she looked at back at Ezra, "Let's go into that alley where we can climb into an vent and get to the ammunition room where we can steal only what we need."
The girl wasn't technically a part of the Rebellion but she did help out whenever they needed her help, Hera kept try
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Prologue
Military Ship, Eden
Doctor Andrew Davis stepped into the lab, his assistant Mary Lewis looked up and smiled at him when he drew closer to her. “Good morning, Doctor Davis.”
“Morning, Mary.” He leaned over her shoulder to look at the screen that she had been looking at. “How’s our girl?”
“She’s sleeping though that’s understandable since she just got out the tank today.” Mary said looking at the screen. In the sterile white room was a young woman who appeared to be in her late teens-early twenties, her black locks framing a halo around her head as she slept in a fetal position. Her skin was a healthy medium tan color; she had black freckles on her face that goes down her neck and arms. Her eyes moved under her closed lids but other than that, she hadn’t moved from her position. “Good news is that she is healthier than her sisters before her and had survived far longer than they had during the inc
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Jha'durs
Classification: Omnivore, Force-sensitive. 

Habitat:  Forests, mountains of Faber.
Height: minimum 30–31 in (76–79 cm)
Intelligence: Very high.

Distinctive Features: Orange eyes with silted pupils, hand-like paws and long whip-like tail.
The Jha’dur is a Force-sensitive pack animal; their packs can consist of ten to twelve. These units were dominated by two alphas. While some Jha’durs have made it off Faber, it is better if the owner is a very strong Force-sensitive because anyone weaker than they are will be viewed as prey and attacked, and non-Force-sensitives general have a hard time training these creatures since they cannot form a bond with the Jha’dur.
Albino Jha'durs are born non-force-sensitive and are the ones that are taken out of their system to be sold or given to someone who was deemed honorable by the Faberians. They have the intelligence of their dark furred kin but are said to be a bit m
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And as my vod'ika :icondelta-sixsevennineoh: said: Ke nu'jurkadir sha Faber translation: Don't mess with Faber.

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Star Wars Legacy: Legends of the White Raven
Spheros...
Spheros wasn’t always an orphan.  There was a point, early in his life where he spent his days and nights with loving parents, a dutiful older brother and an innocent toddler sister.  They were even some of the few amongst the Esra o’Odham to live on one of the rare world bound colonies rather than the massive colony ships.
As it did for so many others, the Empire ended that chapter of his life with staggering violence.  Crimson bolts of light rained down for what felt like days, sending up clouds of dust and ash thick enough to blot out the sun.  To the powerless Esra, it was as if the Lighteaters of their old legends had returned to seek revenge for the people's stolen freedom. Their parents lost, the three children along with the rest of the survivors were retrieved by Seekers of the White Raven, the guardians of their people.
Every child of the Esra is considered sacred, and so even orphans were treated well.  They are taught as we
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SW: Sparring with Darkness
Hanabi knelt in the training room, meditating and trying to find her center after the day's frustrations. She didn't know how much longer she could continue to do this. She was not cruel enough for this new life. She knew that the only reason she was still alive was because Master Kahan, the Grand Inquisitor, allowed her to live and protected her from the ire of his peers, superiors, and subordinates. In her turn she tried to follow his new path but found it hard to execute the level of cruelty that such required. At least Aira-ty seemed to have adapted well to the New Order. She was almost as bad as Master Kahan had become though she was often left at a disadvantage when he interacted with her.
Hanabi sighed fretfully. She knew that Master Kahan still loved Aira-ty and that she loved him...but she knew that neither of them would ever admit it. Love was a vulnerability in the Empire. It was an avenue for an attack that needed to be defended. Hanabi herself was a vulnerability for Maste
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SW: Remember Who You Are
Hanabi followed after her Master hurriedly, catching up to him as he walked briskly through the halls of the Imperial Palace.
“You made her mad again.” she stated worriedly.
The Grand Inquisitor said nothing as she followed after him and so she pressed further.
“You could try being gentler.”
“Why?” he asked somberly. “It won't do her any good.”
“But it will at least show that you care!” protested Hanabi as they continued. “She thinks you've completely abandoned who you used to be!”
The Grand Inquisitor snorted in apparent amusement. “Oh? And who are you referring to?”
“Kahan.” she stated candidly.
He froze in mid-stride, coming to a stop. Hanabi stopped as well, feeling her heart race as he turned to look at her, his blue gaze boring into her silvery eyes.
“What have I told you about using that name?”
“It's who you are!” Hanabi said defiantly.
“No, it's who I wa
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SW: Kaira, The Grand Inquisitor
Commandant Aira-ty Nokta watched as the Jedi captive took another solid punch in the jaw from her Storm Commandos. This wasn't her first interrogation, in the past months since the fall of the Republic and the formation of the Galactic Empire she'd conducted dozens of these interrogations on Jedi and other enemies of the Empire. This was just like any other.
With another blow to the woman's gut, Aira-ty walked forwards, her men stepping aside, one of them lifting the Jedi's head up by her fur to meet her gaze.
“This doesn't have to continue.” Aira-ty said gently, looking into the bothan's eyes. “Tell us what we want to know, and we'll end this.”
The bothan's eyes blazed defiantly as she gazed at Aira-ty hatefully, her jaw remaining shut.
“Keep it up, but don't break her jaw. We need her to talk.” Aira-ty said with a sigh as she stepped back again and let the pair of Storm Commandos resume their ministrations as she leaned against the wall and continu
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'Elo! Just wanted to give you some information about the Lesser and Greater Jha'dur (mostly the Greater since I pretty much told you everything you needed to know about it).

The two species look alike, which make for anyone seeing the two species for the first time and on separate occasions to tell them apart...  

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Expect for the fact that the Greater Jha'dur is larger, it's large enough for someone to ride it though unlike its smaller cousin, the Greater Jha'dur is very hard to tame and will kill anyone who tries to. Showing fear right off the bat will trigger its hunting instincts. And the inside of its mouth and tongue are a neon blue that glows in the dark.

The Greater Jha'dur is very intelligent, it can communicate through the Force and form broken sentences (think that big ass snake from the Chamber of Secrets, that kind of broken sentences). Which is very unnerving to those who haven't grown up with these animals like the Faberians have. 

There's only been two known Greater Jha'dur that have been tames, one that's own by Kirren Tavali (a Faberian/lonagh-whanian hybrid) and Kilara (a new Generation of Inquisitor), neither woman has said how they were able to tame such a ferocious animal but they both bear the scars from it.
A wild Jha'dur gets tamed...

The Jha'dur watched the prey kneel down and reached out its hand, the animal felt it brush its mind and the ears that were pinned back against its head moved forward as the animal sat down. Its posture was relaxed but the prey still kept acting like it would attack.

A smart move.

Jha'durs were the top predators and not the bipedal creatures that shared this planet.

The prey held out their hand and the Jha'dur stood up, it walked towards the prey and sniffed their hand. It was a female prey.

Its tail curled and waved as it bumped its head against her chest, twrring loudly and its long tongue sliding out to lick her face. It kept licking her jaw and behind her ears, tasting her scent and remembering it.

Imprinting on it.

The Jha'dur had found its life companion.
Taming a Wild Jha'dur
A short one shot that I had been sitting on for a while and just now decided to finish it....yes, I know it is short but the taming of a Jha'dur isn't that detailed but it is very dangerous since the Jha'dur will kill you if they don't accept you at the first mind brush.

Sorry, I haven't been positing much...I haven't been much of a Star Wars mood.

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I was going to write a one shot about how to tame a wild Jha'dur but decided against it.

You basically do what Hiccup did with Toothless from How to Train your Dragon but with the Force as well if the person is Force-sensitive.
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"Jha'durs are fierce Faberian hunting animal and like all creatures living on Faber, it is Force-sensitive."
 – Marrika Nerys 

Jha'durs are canine-like creatures native to Faber, Jha'durs were Force-sensitive and thus capable of being domesticated by the native Faberians. 

Biology and appearance 

Jha'durs’ are canine in appearance with the long narrow muzzle and large erected ears but there are some features that make them different than other canine like creatures. All members of the Jha'durs had orange eyes with vertical pupils that were quite disconcerting to other races. They had extremely sharp teeth that ran along the length of their snout, with four fangs protruding over their lower lip, each ending in a double point. Slightly elastic jaw muscle and cheek increase bite force like a rubber-band snapping back and also allows for a large bite range-like a snake. They extremely long green tongue, which they use to smell their prey when their nose to busy smelling something else. They have strong neck and jaws for carrying heavy objects. Their chest is deep and its waist is narrow. The Jha’durs’ paws have semi-retractable claws for extra grip in its high-speed pursuits. They have hand-like paws for climbing and they have strong front legs for climbing as well. And they have a long whiplike tails for balance and maneuvering, their tails can also be used as a weapon and has been known to break bones and cause internal bleeding.
 
Jha'durs was strongly telepathic to their Faberian partners though they sent images to their partners' mind instead of actual words. This ability was a natural manifestation of the Force among their kind. Jha'durs could also 'hide' themselves from the Force, though they could also make themselves detectable in the Force at will if they chose to, just like Faberians. As a whole the species were long lived; the average lifespan for a Jha'dur was 700 years.

Behavior and intelligence


Jha'durs was highly intelligent creatures, capable of understanding verbal commands and intuiting the feelings of those Sentients around it. 

They were territorial creatures, marking the area they claimed as their own by rubbing their bodies around the perimeter. Domesticated Jha'durs would not often leave their owners, but occasionally did roam within the boundaries of their territory independently. Despite their predatory ferocity, Jha'durs was extremely protective of their young and the offspring of those within its social sphere. Human infants needed not to fear a nearby Jha'dur and, in fact, Jha'durs was known to construct nests for human children much as they would for their own pups.

Jha'durs was skilled trackers and fierce hunters, capable of taking down large prey such as Grazers and carrying the carcass back to their abode. Their sharp claws allowed the Jha'dur to climb the sides of buildings and trees, where they would wait to ambush a prospective target. Once the prey was in range, the Jha'dur leaped from their high perch and pouncing in their prey.

When domesticated, Jha'durs was extremely loyal and protective of their masters and their surrounding families.

Jha'durs are always seen in the company of a Faberian and cannot be owned by any non-force-sensitives though they have been seen working alongside non-force-sensitives when their partners are not with them.

Jha'durs was extremely loyal and protective of their masters and their surrounding families.

Jha'durs are always seen in the company of a Faberian and cannot be owned by any non-force-sensitives though they have been seen working alongside non-force-sensitives when their partners are not with them.

Jha’durs are very vocal creatures and can make a lot of noises that range from squeaks to whistles. 

And it is the Jha'durs are the top predators of Faber, wild Jha'durs even hunt lone Faberians mostly because they often mistake Faberians as one of their numerous Force-sensitive prey.

Classification: Omnivore, Force-sensitive. 
Habitat: Forests, mountains of Faber.
Intelligence: Very high.
Distinctive Features: Orange eyes with silted pupils, hand-like paws and long whip-like tail.

The Jha’dur is a Force-sensitive pack animal; their packs can consist of ten to twelve. These units were dominated by an alpha male and alpha female. While some Jha’durs have made it off Faber, it is better if the owner is a very strong Force-sensitive because anyone weaker than they are will be viewed as prey and attacked, and non-Force-sensitives general have a hard time training these creatures since they cannot form a bond with the Jha’dur. 

Jha’durs will eat anything from rotten meat to berries, this works well for them when winter comes and food is scarce. Jha’durs are immune to almost everything, so if the animal eats anything poisonous or that would infect humans or aliens with any virus, the owner doesn’t have to worry about them getting infected when the animal licks their owners or when the Jha’dur accidentally or intentionally bites people. In other words, Jha’durs had very clean mouths, their saliva affecting as a natural disinfect so Faberians tend to use Jha’dur saliva to put over their wounds. The saliva of Jha’durs also acts as a natural blood-clot, preventing the Jha’dur to bleed a lot or leave a trail of blood when the animal tries to hide.
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:iconslingblade87: here's the information of the Jha'durs, I added a few more things about them.
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Star Wars

The Clone Wars: Everything Burns

The Redemption, Separatist Space


Grand Admiral Qatai Vernius stood in the bridge of the Redemption as the Cruiser reverted to realspace, within sight of the Separatist battle cruisers. Her hands were clasped behind her back as she stared out of the viewport with an unwavering eye, she was standing at attention something that she always did now, given how long she had been in this position.

"Ma'am, we are being hailed." A Private said.

Qatai looked over her shoulder and said, "Ignore it... They will learn soon enough on why we are here."

There was a chime and then a hologram of the Empress Regnant appeared next to her, "Start the boarding, destroy all but the center ship."

"Your will is our own." Qatai said with a fist over her heart and a slight bow before the hologram disappeared. "All ships open fire! Launch the fighters!!" 

From the side view-ports, she could see the fighters zooming by. "Send out the boarding parties! A Saberian for each one!"

Qatai will teach these weaklings what true power was...

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Adron and Kaden both looked up when they felt the ship quiver and a loud tearing sound going through the ship before they looked at each other, saying in sync, "They're here...."

"Who's here?" Darion asked.

Adron looked at him and said, "....You'll see, stand away from the door." Kaden and him then ushered the rest of the children away from the door and to the far corner.

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A group of battle droids were standing under a boarding pod or something that looked similar to one. The door to the pod opened causing the droids to charge their blasters but nothing came out then they heard a metallic shink sound then a droid being lifted by something.

Not something...there was a shimmery image in front of the raised droid and a shimmery something impaling it. There was a crackling sound and then the attacker was revealed, the attacker was obviously a woman, she wore a black metal breastplate which does not cover her midsection, and a black leather strap went cross her collar to attach to her right pauldron. She also wore black gauntlets, thin and beautifully designed tassets were over a black loincloth and greaves as well as foot armor. Under the armor that goes just below her bust was a black mesh bodysuit. On her right wrist was a gauntlet knives, they are retractable, serrated blades between six and eighteen inches in length and two to eight inches wide that extend over the back of the hand from the gauntlet worn on the woman’s wrist. Generally, the blades come in pairs, mounted in parallel, but there are exceptions to this. These deadly weapons are sharp enough to cut through bone and are intended for use against unarmored combatants or those who have been disarmed. As a last resort, they can sometimes be fired as a projectile from their gauntlet. The woman lifted her arm that was free and pulled up her mask, revealing the face of an attractive woman. She has pure-white skin, due to the lack of sunlight on her home planet, and gold eyes, which is sensitive to light and purple lips. Her face are marked with the sign of womanhood, which is small four black dots that starts from her forehead and goes down the bridge of her nose, and two black stripes going diagonally down her cheeks, on both sides and a faded purple stripe that covers her eyes and brows. She has canines like a cat's, elongated and curving, ending in delicate, piercing points but they are stronger than they look and she has long nails that ended in points.

She has long, thick white hair, her hair is styled in a half-bun with four thick braids, hanging to her hip; the braid over her shoulder is held together by a black leather band with gold clasps on the both ends of the band and the three braids that hangs behind her back is held together by a gold, thin, long clasp. She has thin braids on either side of their heads that does into the bun and her bangs fall to her breasts.

"Tsk, droids...don't the Separatist use flesh and blood soldiers?"

A slug goes flying passed her and hitting a droid in the head, it dropped and a woman landed next to her wielding dual blasters. Her clothing consisted of a carapace-like armor that hugged her skin and covered every bit of it, including her hands, painted in dark ebony, with white stripes down the front side, a zipper running all the way up to secure herself, her thick hardened boots making sounds of footsteps on the floor. She reached up and pulled her hood up to cover her face, she then tucked her black hair that was pulled back in a braid into the hood before slipping her sunglasses on and taping the side which triggered the tinting of her sunglasses to cover the lens, covering her almond shaped brown eyes. The lens were actually her HUD.

"Because they are pathetic and the Republic should have put them down like rabid animals before this war even started." The woman snapped as she shot another droid. "Just rip these droids apart, Ryssa...my sons are here."

"Of course, Empress Regnant Kalene Vernius." Ryssa purred out before she threw impaled droid away then she lunged towards the other droids, ripping them apart.

Kalene followed after the Saberian but at a much slower pace, shooting any droids that the other woman had missed. As she walked, she took in the design of the ship. It wasn't anything like the ships her people have, there are consoles on the walls and next to the doors. All of their ships, on the other hand, didn't have anything that gave away how to open a door or use a holoscreen.

One had to be Force-sensitive in order to use their technology, ships and blasters.

Everything was internal.

A door softly whisked open, Kalene stepped into the open and shot the droids in the head. She was no longer interested in them even before their offlined metal bodies hit the ground. Kalene got to the console and started to type, looking up at the screen as she typed.

Her sister's voice sounded from the built in comlink in her glareshades, "Another fleet of ships just jumped out of hyperspace, Your Highness."

"Who?"
 
"The Republic." You could literally hear Qatai's lip curl in distaste when she said that.

"Keep them at bay, Grand Admiral Vernius."

"As you wish, Your Grace." 

Kalene stepped away from the console, she shot it numerous times before she turned and walked out of the room. She looked down both sides of the corridor before she let's out a sharp 'sound' in the Force and a black creature came bounding towards her until it came to a skidding stop before her.

"Find my sons, Jax."

Jax chirped before he spun around and started to walk ahead of her, his nose to the ground and his ears rotating as he moved. His tail was raised slightly above the ground. As Kalene followed after him, she took in his appearance. He had a long narrow muzzle and large erected ears; he had orange eyes with vertical pupils that were quite disconcerting to other races. He had extremely sharp teeth that ran along the length of his snout, with four fangs protruding over his lower lip, each ending in a double point. Slightly elastic jaw muscle and cheek increase bite force like a rubber-band snapping back and also allows for a large bite range-like a snake, she had seen Jax bite someone before. He had an extremely long green tongue, which he used to smell his prey when his nose was too busy smelling something else. He had strong neck and jaws for carrying heavy objects. His chest was deep and his waist was narrow. He had hand-like paws for climbing and his paws had semi-retractable claws for extra grip in high-speed pursuits, and he has strong, slender front legs for climbing. And he has a long whiplike tails for balance and maneuvering, his tail can also be used as a weapon and she had seen Jax use it before to break bones and cause internal bleeding for prey and enemies.

As she moved through the ship, she saw droids littering the around either torn to pieces or with their heads missing. 

Ryssa wasn't holding back despite the fact that they were living opponents.

Kalene stepped over the droids, ignoring everything around her until she sensed something...something familiar but yet not. She stopped and looked towards a wall, her brown eyes narrowing before she looked around and started to walk once more.

She'd worry about that later, she wanted her sons back...

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Joe, Sarah and Kirren were staring out the large viewport when the cruiser jumped out of hyperspace and saw an unknown fleet of ships attacking the Separatist.

"Never seen ships like those before..." Joe said.

Kirren's eyes narrowed when she noticed something, "Yeah, well there's a fleet of them heading this way." All three watched as the ships flew towards them but stopped right in front of them, and slightly around them, they could see the cannons swerving towards them.

"Hail them, let them know we mean them no harm." Sarah ordered.

"Yes, ma'am!"

Kirren eyed the middle ship warily, it was larger than the others but was similar in design. 

"We're not getting any 
acknowledgement for our hails, ma'am." The Ensign said. 

"Keep trying." Sarah ordered before she looked at Joe and Kirren. "What do we do now?"

"We don't know anything about them so we can't just move forward." Joe said.

Kirren nodded in agreement and said, "That and from the looks of things, they seem to be doing very well by themselves...never seen weapons like theirs before. They are tearing through those Seps ships like they are tissue paper..."

The last Separatist ship exploded and the unknown fleet of ships surrounded the dismantled ship, while the other half of their fleet kept the Republic fleet at bay.

All hails to the unknown fleet continued to go unanswered.......

Chapter 2
Look at that Chapter 2....and about time too :P 

Do the hail continue to go unanswered? Maybe, maybe not :P You'll just have to wait until Chapter 3 :P

Darion and Venris belongs to :iconriskelliongamble:

Joe and Sarah belongs to :iconjoeblue:

lonagh-whanians belongs to :iconrayn44:

I only own the Faberians.
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'Elo! Just wanted to give you some information about the Lesser and Greater Jha'dur (mostly the Greater since I pretty much told you everything you needed to know about it).

The two species look alike, which make for anyone seeing the two species for the first time and on separate occasions to tell them apart...  

Jha'dur Full Body by MandoGirl22
Expect for the fact that the Greater Jha'dur is larger, it's large enough for someone to ride it though unlike its smaller cousin, the Greater Jha'dur is very hard to tame and will kill anyone who tries to. Showing fear right off the bat will trigger its hunting instincts. And the inside of its mouth and tongue are a neon blue that glows in the dark.

The Greater Jha'dur is very intelligent, it can communicate through the Force and form broken sentences (think that big ass snake from the Chamber of Secrets, that kind of broken sentences). Which is very unnerving to those who haven't grown up with these animals like the Faberians have. 

There's only been two known Greater Jha'dur that have been tames, one that's own by Kirren Tavali (a Faberian/lonagh-whanian hybrid) and Kilara (a new Generation of Inquisitor), neither woman has said how they were able to tame such a ferocious animal but they both bear the scars from it.

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